Needs work.; but still good :)
i aight one of those "bitches" (example the last guy) but i dont hav 2 things i would change.
1. The beat should contain a deeper Bass Beat. The one that starts up doesnt really fit in.
2. the beggining bass is fine, its just when the song comes to place there should be a deeper one.
so with a deeper Bass Beat and bass, ur song will not sound as dry. giv it a try
my songs: http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/view.php?id=1789493