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Needs work.; but still good :)

i aight one of those "bitches" (example the last guy) but i dont hav 2 things i would change.
1. The beat should contain a deeper Bass Beat. The one that starts up doesnt really fit in.

2. the beggining bass is fine, its just when the song comes to place there should be a deeper one.

so with a deeper Bass Beat and bass, ur song will not sound as dry. giv it a try

my songs: http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/view.php?id=1789493

DaGrahamCraka responds:

thanks, ill check your stuff out too.

Magix Music Maker, pffft.

ok kid, i kno this program Magix Music Maker. And the Piano and Gutar synths come with a pre-made toon/ They both happen to hav the same one. you used the pre-made toons and just added them together. not much skill required in that. even when i used the program, (a long time ago) i made my own beats n' toons.
nice try...

nice!

i luv the song. i realy like the synths u used.
but in the begining the beat doesnt seem to fit in, but after a while it works. nice song man, luv it. check out my songs! :D

http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/view.php?id=1789493

AnSpal1202 responds:

I know, just tryin stuff out man, and Ill check out ur stuff =), glad you liked it

hell yeh!

hell yeh man. this song blows my mind! i luv it. keep up that work of gold.

alright!

everthing in this song rock.
the bass beat could be a lil higher. but nice job :)

OMG! HELL YEH!

OMG! NICE!
i luv the toon! makes me want party til the sun falls down on the...... earthm or somehting like that.....
any ways NICE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
wish it was longer, but w/e

KEEP UP THAT WORK OF GOLD!!!!!!!!

Paulie-Wallie responds:

thanks, appreciate it

eh....

this song just doesnt work out. the beat does not fit in since theres no bass beat. and for a DnB song, the number of synth should be higher, i didnt even hear a bass.
listen to other hiigh rated songs and try to get an idea of thoses.

if u want u can check out mine:
http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/view.php?id=1789493

dont giv up thO!

Renshi responds:

Im trying not to >_<. The stuff I will post wont reall be under genues for real. And your right, I know I diddnt put in bass... Its one of my Xperimental ones, I needed more critique!

Thank for the Critique bunches, and I'll cheak out your stuff.

Age 32, Male

SF, Ca.

Joined on 11/13/06

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